This week my class made an ending for the story "The way finder" this is my one, hope you like it and tell me what you think of it (:
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, May 13, 2021
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Brilliant writing Stirling. What a twist to the end of the story! How devastated they would have all been back on the original island. You have presented your DLO very effectively and your readers will easily read your text. Keep up the fantastic work Stirling and I will wait to see what you post next.
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